Example Writing

July 2012

"Lucy is at her 18yr old best in this scene as I give her freedom to show off her curvy smooth body, she performs a delicious blow job on her hands and knees. I love how she looks so hot with my big dick fucking her pretty face. "

In this short line of text I was describing a scene for a short movie that my client was posting for sale here. I attempted to highlight the girls soft beauty being dominated and invaded by the mans hard ugly penis. This appeals to the mans sense of power and strength, playing to his natural ego.

It was only a short piece that I did not initially charge for but I researched the movie and tried to judge the profile of the user it was aimed at.

August 2012

Lucy has a great ass, perky, soft and firm. I make her push this peach into the air for me to play with. She's wearing cute white knickers that look so good stretched over that smooth firm skin. I stroke, knead, stretch and lick as she gets more turned on.

In this passage of text I once again use words aimed at users who are looking for ass fetish type content. I use soft erotic words to describe the girl " soft, perky, firm, peach" whilst I describe the actions of the guy in the film in stronger words. He " makes" her "push", he " stretches" and " kneads". I'm appealing to the users natural feeling in this type of fetish to dominate the girl. I attempt to start stimulating him with the key words.. This small passage was once again for the client above . The video can be found 

here.